Positive - I thought your work on the Google document was good. It showed your hard work.
Negative - Nothing. Other - Congratulations on your award! Merry Christmas! Happy Holidays! See you in January 2017.
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Positive - I am glad that the questions about introductory paragraphs and sentence variety were asked. These are signs that you have worked to an accomplished stage of writing where you think about mechanics and are defining/re-defining what distinguishes writing from good or great writing.
Negative - Nothing. Other - Nothing. Positive - I am glad the questions about punctuation and writer's block were asked. First, it takes time to get punctuation down. That is why we have editors today; they help with punctuation. Second, numerous people struggle with writer's block. When this happens to you, don't get discouraged; it will pass.
Negative - Sometimes I think I am talking too much and not having you speak. Other - Nothing. Positive - I believe that the team has moved to an advanced stage of English writing. They are asking questions and attempting and succeeding with novel approaches of writing.
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