Positive - We mentioned 3 things. First, practice writing headlines in the writing group. Pick a subject and then everyone writes a headline. Then share headlines and analyze why one headline is better than another. Second, rewrite and improve someone else's writing. This is good practice in writing and analyzing. Third, review How Reporters Think Leads below.
Negative - Nothing negative. Other - How Reporters Think Leads: What is unique or the most important thing that happened?; Who was involved?; Is a direct or delayed lead better?; Is there a colorful word or phrase that I can work into the headline? (Marketing; Sense words; words that sell); What is the subject, and what verb will best move the reader into the story?
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Positive - I am glad we were able to talk today, and I feel fortunate to speak with you each week!
Negative - I wish I had more time today. Other - Feel free to schedule an additional session. Positive - We had a good internet signal today and were able to have a good conversation.
Negative - I failed to write an evaluation for Nixon's paper; I confused the date. Other - Tunapanda has a good culture and its goals help support that culture. Positive: I think we have a good start on the goals spreadsheet. Our job is to finish it and begin working toward our goals. I also enjoyed learning about the young people coming into Tunapanda, and the older people's response to the institute.
Negative: This is not a bad comment, but I did ask that writing assignments be delivered earlier because of the time difference. I need more time to review them before our sessions. Other: I will look for examples of short articles/passages that mentees can read and help improve their writing. Positive - Good questions. We reviewed everyone's papers. We discussed writing style, and the next assignment is for the mentees to write using a different style.
Negative - Nothing. Other - I forgot to remind everyone about the time change. My apologies. The United States has set its clocks back an hour. There is now an 8 hour time difference. Positive - I am glad we were able to get through everyone's papers. I thought your questions were good. I believe we have developed a good rapport.
Negative - Nothing Other - I will try to plan for a writing time where participants write instead of listening. I will try to send docs directly to you. I hope our connection problems will be fixed soon. Positive - Reconnected with group
Negative - Poor connection Other - We will meet on Friday, Nov 4 Postive - Nothing
Negative - We did not meet; I do not know why. Other - Sent emails. |
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